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zhuyuzlf@2003-12-25 12:21
看是容易的,翻译是很难的
cloudzm@2003-12-25 12:31
翻译不太难,要翻的很有诗意就很难了
hu14@2003-12-25 14:08
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支持楼主!!
不过翻译水平....呵呵....有点汗颜呵...
但是还是强烈支持!!!
我汗如雨下啊!真是献丑了......
是大意,不是翻译。我绝对不承认我写的东西叫做翻译......(自我安慰中.........)
gailv@2003-12-25 16:11
日本的制作人对待每一部动画动一丝不苟!
angel0@2003-12-25 16:33
尽管有些看的不是太明白,但是也算是一个大概的了解吧
wing130083@2003-12-25 16:48
基本上没多说什么啊
就是大家在资料站经常看的那些
绘本怎么连一点新的资料都不给……
Nel_IamAgg@2003-12-25 16:58
翻译~~(注,我看不懂日文,是按照英文翻译的)
1/REDMOON
朱の月
1/Before then
This was a very long time ago.
A story of when the planer was still relatively quiet,and fires began to spark.
这是很久以前,当这个星球还十分安静,火焰开始闪耀时的故事。
Many things were on this planet,it was able to work with many chikdren.
在这颗行星上有许多的物种,他们是行星的孩子。
From very small things,to very large things.
From gentle,harmless things,to brutal,violent things.
From things hidden deep within the oceans,to things moving along the outermost reaches of skies.
从微小的种类到巨大的种类。
从温和的种类到残暴的种类。
从那深藏在海底的种类到那翱翔天际的种类。
Nothing was said,not even once.
Either way,a lot of children were raised.
没有留下任何记载(nothing was said是指历史书上什么也没说,没有人知道为什么,没有人记得怎样...),许许多多的孩子成长繁衍。
However,during this time,a stranger child was born.
How this one was different from all the other children up till then,the planet couldn't explain.
The planet only knew that this living thing was different.
And for the first time,it began to worry about its fate.
然而在这时,一个奇怪的孩子诞生了。
就是连那盖雅(地球既然有意志,就把它当作盖雅好了),也无法解释为什么他与众不同。
盖雅只知道,这活物的与众不同。
并且它第一次开始为命运而担心。
Upon hearing the worries of the planet,the king of the moon came.
月之王听到了盖雅的忧虑而来。
"Since you are defenseless and unbale to move,I shall protect you."
“既然你如此无助(不能动又不能保护自己,够脆弱的吧),那我来保护你。”
With his kind,scary,red eyes,the king of the moon made this promise.
The planet gladly accepted,and became a child of the moon.
And so,the people of the moon came down to live.
月之王以他那特有的,红色的,令人惊骇的双眼立下誓言。
盖雅高兴得接受了,并成为了月之子。
从而月之民下凡到了地上生活。
The planet attempted to imitate the moon and create a king on earth.
However,no matter how hard it tried...a king would not be born.
Except,instead of being a mirror image of itself,the people of the moon had severe flaws.
The planet loved its own children.
Naturally,the people of the moon also loved the children of the planet.
盖雅尝试着模仿月亮创造出地之王来。
但无论如何努力,地之王始终没有诞生。
而为了不至相互雷同,月之民有着自己的缺点。(所谓的缺点即个性)
盖雅爱着它自己的孩子。很自然的,月之民也爱盖雅的孩子。
The planet wondered if it was okey for its children to be eaten.
盖雅一直在困惑为什么要吃掉自己的孩子。
The planet didn't know.
The king of the moon protected the planet,not because it was adroable.
He wanted a beautiful world to replace his country,which had lost everything.
盖雅不知道,月之王不是为了它的美丽而保护这颗星球。
他要一个美丽的世界来代替他那失去了一切的故乡。
暗の夜@2003-12-25 17:00
竟然如此的深奥...
Skybow@2003-12-25 17:06
网上有这个东东的视频,就是图片加说明文字(英文),还有就是有背景音乐
wing130083@2003-12-25 17:07
突然发现这月姬怎么和封神有着一脉相通的设定啊。
外星人……
Ark@2003-12-25 17:30
把4/Just Before Then留给我吧……好歹也要作些贡献……同时练英语。
Nel_IamAgg@2003-12-25 17:44
Shinso,true ancestor.That's what the new representatives of the planet were called.
Because of one flaw,the population of fairles who received flesh was decreasing.
Sucking blood.Maybe the Shinso,who lusted after blood from the subjects they ruled and punished,were wrong from the beginning.
It was an unbalanced system and there wasn't enough to be divided enenly,so in turn,their numbers decreased.
Even so,the Shinso people battled on.
Even after the evil king of the moon was gone,they fought ruthlessly battling the demon who tainted the planet.
However.
真祖,新的盖雅代言人的名字。
因为一个缺陷,那接受了血肉之躯的精灵数量正不断减少。
吸血。即使是真祖,被那由他们统治的血诱惑,也是犯下了不可饶恕的大错。(圣经说,血是活物的命。这里的blood就有双重含义,即指血液又指生物。)
这是个不平衡的体系,又无法把他们隔离,于是真祖的数量不断减少。
(以三权分立为代表,在西方的文化里,不能存在不受约束的权力,否则就会产生各种弊端。而真祖对下辖的生物有绝对的权力,故而称之为不平衡的体系。无法把真祖与普通生物隔离,故当诱惑摆在面前而又没有约束时真祖的数量不断减少。)
即使这样,真祖们仍然在尽到自己的职责。
即使在邪恶的月之王被消灭之后,仍然在与污染行星的恶魔残酷的战斗着。
然而
Human blood is the most poisonous. Especially for faires.Once they take in human blood...they becom demons.
人类的血最为剧毒。特别是对精灵,一旦尝过人血...他们将成为恶魔。
There's no one left at the castle.
城堡里一个人也没有(幸存)。
The shacklesare fragile,the sins,heavy.
No one knew which sins were punishable.
链铐断为碎片。罪孽,深重。
没有人知道哪些罪会受惩罚。
The princess had her usual dream again today.
She doesn't like seeding these dreams at all.
Her dream was a deep red today also.
今天公主又作了她平常那个梦。
她一点也不愿意让梦再去发展。(超级晦涩的比喻,假如把恶梦比作土壤,那么在上面播种让它长出来开花结实就是再让恶梦进一步发展。)
她的梦今天也是深红色的。
She doesn't see these dreams because she enjoys them.
After all,no one had defined what enjoyable is.
她看不见梦因为她喜欢梦。
毕竟,没有人玷污自己喜欢的东西。
Nel_IamAgg@2003-12-25 17:47
自己没有文学天赋,所以有些晦涩的部分只好长篇累牍的解释。假如还有看不懂的(我的天啊,不要拿刀砍我),我会进一步解释。
seikaieva2000as@2003-12-25 17:49
总觉的在看这个前写了《月下幻》是正确的~~~~~
Ark@2003-12-25 18:14
4/Just before then(未完)
The white Princess, who was a shinso.
she who has awoken, she is referred to with much hate... and fear.
白色的公主,真祖之姬。
醒来的她,被卷入很深的仇恨……与恐惧之中。
she has the best capabilities.
she has hunted many demons with her power,
captured them, and rippeded them to shreds.
her empty heart still doesn't know emotion,
and still unaware of the origins of the demons.
to the expectations of the weakening shinso people,
she tore apart many vampires.
她有最强的能力。
她用她的能力捕猎过许多的恶魔,
捕获它们,将它们撕成碎片。(把它们轰至渣……)
她空虚的心灵仍然不理解感情,
仍然不知道邪念的起源。
应着衰弱的真祖的期待,
她撕碎了许多死徒。(这里的vampire应该是死徒吧?)
她的世界就是城堡。
她只是撕裂恶魔,然后回到城堡,
陷入睡眠,忘却至今发生的每件事。
公主保持着纯洁,幼稚地被利用着。
感情和记忆,这些琐事没有存在的必要。
仅仅吸血,不能实现重现回忆的想法和其他的愿望。
公主的身体,乃至高之体。
变成这样的时候……不就和月之王(Typemoon)回来(复出)了一样吗?
在公主保持纯洁的时候,真祖利用她。
她只是惩罚堕落真祖的工具。
她不应该拥有任何无价值的能力。
重新开始,重新开始。
她得到什么都无所谓……
重新开始,重新开始。
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但是,一个人类(废柴?)爱上了公主。
人类的血液,是万毒之王。
红色血液,流在白色礼服上……(ROA,这是你的唯一“贡献”)
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