[转贴]犬夜叉309话EN文字版～|『高桥留美子专区』 - 『漫游』酷论坛

[转贴]犬夜叉309话EN文字版～

NPC@2003-04-22 07:17

上传有些问题，图就是上次沙非大和KARIN贴过的。
P8 KAGOME看着桔梗胸前的洞
P12 被净化的水池

Inuyasha
-Sengoku o-Togi Zoushi
Part 309
Version: 0.800
Title: Choice
Written and illustrated by Rumiko Takahashi
Translated from: Shounen Sunday 2003 #20, 16th April 2003
© Rumiko Takahashi and Shogakukan 1996-2002

Translation & editing by
Chris Rijk
Additional translating and editing by
No one yet

This translation is © Chris Rijk 1996-2002.
Done expressly for non-profit use only. No unorthorised selling, renting etc.
Get the latest version from http://www.wot-club.org.uk/Inuyasha/.
Translations of this chapter, but with different styling/content are also available - a plain text version and also a text version with all the original Japanese for the speech and sound effects.

Translation notes and style

Although scene descriptions are provided, it is not nearly the same as seeing it for yourself. If you enjoy the series, I would strongly recommend buying the tankoubon (collected version, each about 180 pages or 10 chapters long, costing 410 yen) when they become available (typically 3-4 months after the weekly Shonen Sunday release), and the first 21 volumes are now on sale.

Warning: These translations will occationally include strong language, and violence, though this is only when it is present in the original Japanese version.

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 1

1
[View of Kagome and Kikyou.]
Title
Choice

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 2

1
[At the water's edge, Kagome turns to talk to the two shikigami girls.]
fx water shh...
Kagome
What has happened... to Kikyou?
2
[Closeup of Kikyou under the water.]
fx bubbles glub
3
[Closeup of the two shikigami.]
shikigami
After Mt Hakurei collapased...

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 3

1
[Flashback drawing to when Kikyou was stabbed through the chest from Naraku's attack and pushed into a ravine.]
shikigami
{voice over} she was pierced by Naraku's poisonous tentacles,
and fell into the stream of miasma.
2
[Closeup of Kagome.]
shikigami
{off} Her body, made from holy bones and burial soil, was not dissolved by the miasma.
However...
3
[Drawing of Kikyou in the miasma.]
shikigami
{voice over} permeating through her wounds, the miasma spread throughout her body,
and while the hole in her chest remains open, she'll continue to decay.
4
[View of the two girls.]
shikigami
The only one who can save her,
is you.

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 4

1
[Closeup of Kagome, not showing much expression.]
Kagome
Only I... can save Kikyou!?
2
[Side view of the two shikigami.]
shikigami
Right now...
her life is in your hands.
3
[Closeup of Kikyou in the water.]
4
[Closeup of Kagome.]
Kagome
So that's why they asked me to choose...
How should... I save her!?

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 5

1
[The two shikigami girls don't show much expression ever, but they seem a bit surprised.]
shikigami#1 ......
shikigami#2
You will save her?
2
[Closeup side view of Kagome, looking serious.]
Kagome
I, isn't that obvious!
I'm the only one who can save her, right?
In which case...
3
[View of the two girls.]
shikigami#1
You only need to touch her.
shikigami#2
That will purify the miasma.
4
[Kagome puts her ruck-sack down on the ground.]
Kagome
Okay.
fx ruck-sack snk
5
[Kagome steps into the water near Kikyou.]
fx water shh
6
[Closeup side view of Kagome looking a bit surprised.]
Kagome
This water...
is painful...
fx water *sting...*

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 6

1
[Closeup of Kikyou, with miasma leaking out from her body.]
Kagome
Naraku's miasma is seeping out.
2
[Kagome puts a hand to Kikyou.]
fx water shh
3
[Suddenly, Kagome is pulled down.]
fx Kagome *tug*
Kagome !?
4
[Kagome and Kikyou are pulled deep down into the pool.]
fx water slish...

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 7

1
[Closeup of Kagome looking a bit worried.]
fx Kagome glub
Kagome
Wha...!?
2
[Kagome looks around - around them is a dark menacing cloud.]
fx miasma ooze...
Kagome !
3
[Misty frame.]
Kagome
This is... the miasma that dissolved into the water!?

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 8

1
[Closeup of Kagome thinking.]
Kagome
All of this...
2
[View of Kikyou with miasma oozing out from her body.]
fx miasma ooze...
Kagome
came from Kikyou's body...?
3
[Kagome moves towards Kikyou.]
Kagome
Sorry about this...
I'll take a look.
4
[Kagome pulls back Kikyou's kimono somewhat - the large deep scar in Kikyou's chest can clearly be seen, with miasma leaking out.]
Kagome !
5
[Closeup of Kagome, looks a bit sad.]
Kagome
How terrible...
I feel sorry for her...

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 9

1
[In the darkness, Kagome notices something shining up above her.]
fx light sparkl...
2
[Kagome reaches out for it.]
Kagome
What...?
3
[Closeup of it becoming more organised, into a clump.]
fx bright mist swirl...
4
[It comes to collect in Kagome's hand, quite bright against the gloom of the miasma around her.]
fx soil sksh...

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
[COMMENTS] This is the same sound effect as when the two shikigami poured the soil into the pool two chapters ago.

5
[Closeup of Kagome looking surprised.]
Kagome
This is...?
6
[Up out of the water, the two shikigami can just about be seen.]
shikigami#1
It is her burial soil.
shikigami#2
Right now... your hand has purified it.
7
[Misty frame.]
shikigami
Put that into the hole in her chest...

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 10

1
[View of Kagome looking up towards the surface, with a serious expression.]
Kagome
I get it.
2
[Kagome pushes her hand holding the soil onto Kikyou's chest.]
fx soil shh...
3
[Kagome winces as a large amount of miasma seems to come out at once.]
fx miasma *gush*
Kagome
Ah!?
4
[View of miasma streaming away from Kikyou.]
fx miasma whoosh
Kagome
The miasma is being pushed out by the burial soil!?
5
[Closeup of Kagome, with miasma streaming past her. She has her eyes closed in pain.]
fx miasma whoosh
Kagome
It hurts.

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 11

1
[Closeup of Kagome, with her eyes open.]
Kagome
Huh...?
2
[Closeup of Kikyou's chest - the wound is pretty much entirely gone, though some miasma is still leaking out.]
fx miasma shhh...
Kagome
The wound is...
closing up...
3
[View of the miasma leaking out from Kikyou.]
Kagome
The miasma... is being forced out.
4
[Closeup of Kagome putting a lot of force onto Kikyou's chest, and a large amount of miasma comes out.]
fx miasma whoosh...
Kagome
Go for it.
5
[Closeup of Kikyou's face.]
fx Kikyou *twitch*

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 12

1
[Kagome looks around her in surprise. The water is completely clean and light is shining strong down through the water. Nice scene.]
fx water shh...
Kagome
Ah...
2
[Closeup of Kagome.]
Kagome
The water... has become clean...
The miasma has been purified...
3
[Kagome's eyes close.]
Kagome
Thank... goodness...
fx Kagome glub...
4
[Kagome seems to have fallen unconscious. However, Kikyou is awake, with her usual poker-face.]
Kikyou ......

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 13

1
[Time passes. View of the trees around the pool.]
fx leaves rustle...
2
[Closeup of Kagome waking up, with water on her face.]
Kagome
Uh...
3
[Kagome is lying beside the pool by herself.]
fx water shh...
Kagome !
4
[Kagome starts to sit up. Kikyou is standing a short distance away with her back to Kagome, with the two girl shikigami around her.]
fx leaves rustle...
5
[Closeup of Kagome.]
Kagome
Kikyou!
6
[Kikyou turns around to look.]

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 14

1
[Closeup of Kikyou glancing back at Kagome.]
Kikyou
Why... did you save me?
2
[Closeup of Kagome looking a bit surprised.]
Kagome Eh...!?
3
[Kagome is now standing up, and adresses Kikyou.]
Kagome
Erm...
But, weren't you the one who called me here!?
4
[Closeup of Kikyou.]
Kikyou
You should have made a choice though.
Whether to save me or not.

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 15

1
[Kagome looks at Kikyou, a bit confused.]
Kagome
Umm, you know...
It's not a question of making a choice, is it.
2
[Closeup of Kagome.]
Kagome
There was a person right in front of me who I could save,
and was told that I was the only person who could save you,
of course I would save you.
3
[Closeup of Kikyou, poker-faced.]
Kikyou ......
In which case...

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 16

1
[Kikyou turns to look away from Kagome.]
Kikyou
I won't thank you.
It was your choice.

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
[COMMENTS] I think what Kikyou means is that since Kagome "didn't go to the effort" of making a choice, she won't thank Kagome for saving her.

2
[Closeup of Kagome looking rather taken aback.]
Kagome
Huh!?
3
[Kagome has a sort of depressed, sort of like she's not very surprised.]
Kagome
It seems she's already...
as direct as she ever was...
fx Kagome *si-i-i-gh*

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
[COMMENTS] This line of Kagome's is also a bit ambiguous. One meaning is that for someone who was just saved from dying, Kikyou is (already) back to her usual forceful self. The other is that when Kikyou said "I won't thank you", that wasn't her true feelings.

4
[Closeup of Kikyou as she's walking away.]
Kikyou
Inuyasha will be arriving soon.
Coming for you...
5
[Kagome watches Kikyou walk off, seeming a bit surprised.]
Kagome Eh...
fx Kikyou *walk over ground*

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 17

1
[Closeup of Kagome, looking a bit annoyed.]
Kagome
Hey... Where are you going!?
Aren't you going to meet with Inuyasha?
2
[Kikyou turns to glance back at Kagome.]
Kikyou
I will be hiding myself for a bit longer.
I have to build up my power.
3
[Drawing of Inuyasha (only one in the entire chapter) with Kagome overlaid.]
Kagome
Inuyasha...
4
[Continuation of same frame.]
Kagome
wants to see Kikyou.
5
[Long view of Kagome from above.]
Kagome
It's annoying, but...

--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 18

1
[Scene change to where Kikyou is walking through the forest with the two girl Shikigami.]
Kikyou
In Kagome's heart,
there wasn't any doubt.
2
[Closeup of Kikyou putting a hand to her chest.]
Kikyou
If she had doubted,
the hole in my chest wouldn't have been filled.
3
[Closeup of Kikyou, looking a bit troubled.]
Kikyou
It's still warm.

Last modified April 20th 2003

引用

eden@2003-04-22 09:39

感谢N兄:)
昨儿我气喘吁吁的跑到书店想去翻jump看309的，没想到书店关门了:(
六点就关门了，有没有搞错||||

引用

NPC@2003-04-22 10:07