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NPC@2003-05-28 09:59

Inuyasha
-Sengoku o-Togi Zoushi
Part 312
Version: 0.800
Title: The Order
Written and illustrated by Rumiko Takahashi
Translated from: Shounen Sunday 2003 #24, 14th May 2003
© Rumiko Takahashi and Shogakukan 1996-2002

Translation & editing by
Chris Rijk
Additional translating and editing by
No one yet

This translation is © Chris Rijk 1996-2002.
Done expressly for non-profit use only. No unorthorised selling, renting etc.
Get the latest version from http://www.wot-club.org.uk/Inuyasha/.
Translations of this chapter, but with different styling/content are also available - a plain text version and also a text version with all the original Japanese for the speech and sound effects.

Translation notes and style

Although scene descriptions are provided, it is not nearly the same as seeing it for yourself. If you enjoy the series, I would strongly recommend buying the tankoubon (collected version, each about 180 pages or 10 chapters long, costing 410 yen) when they become available (typically 3-4 months after the weekly Shonen Sunday release), and the first 21 volumes are now on sale.

Warning: These translations will occationally include strong language, and violence, though this is only when it is present in the original Japanese version.

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Page 1

1
[View of Sango looking a bit desperate, overlaid over a shot of Kohaku with his sickle-blade weapon.]
Title
The Order

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Page 2

1
[Outside in the castle grounds, Kohaku slices up some Youkai birds.]
Naraku
Kohaku, protect the baby.
fx bird *slice*
2
[Scene shift - a group of birds are shot by a hail of arrows.]
fx arrows vish vish
fx arrows thud thud
3
[View of some archers, preparing to fire another volley.]
fx bows *strain strain*
soldier
Protect the young master.
Don't let the monsters near the bedroom.
4
[Kohaku slices some more birds.]
Kohaku
Did these Youkai birds...
attack the castle knowing that the baby is here!?
fx bird *slice*

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Page 3

1
[Kohaku trips over the corpse of a man.]
fx Kohaku thnk
Kohaku !
2
[Kohaku falls to the ground.]
fx Kohaku thmp
3
[Two birds approach Kohaku and he's in a bad position to protect himself.]
fx birds swish
4
[The birds are sliced by a blade.]
fx birds thunk
5
[A soldier is standing near Kohaku, holding a halberd.]
fx soldier shh
soldier
Where are you doing here!
6
[Kohaku partially gets up, but it seems the soldiers can't see his weapon.]
soldier#1
A child of a servant huh?
soldier#2
Hide yourself!
7
[Closeup of Kohaku.]
Kohaku
They... protected me...
... Yessir.

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Page 4

1
[Scene change. Speed lined frame.]
fx air swish
2
[Closeup of Sango, looking somewhat surprised.]
Sango
Kohaku...
is in the castle!?
3
[View of the group rushing along.]
Kagome
There's a Shikon fragment there.
Just one...
So it is likely...
Sango ......
4
[Closeup side view of Sango thinking.]
Sango
Kohaku... Is he on orders from Naraku again?
5
[Continuation of above frame.]
Sango
What are you planning this time!?

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Page 5

1
[Front view of the group, with Inuyasha talking to Sango, who looks slightly surprised.]
Inuyasha
Sango.
When we reach the castle, you go straight to where Kohaku is.
Sango Eh...?
2
[The scene shifts to a view of the castle ahead, with a huge flock of birds swooping down to attack.]
fx birds whoosh
3
[Closeup of Inuyasha.]
Inuyasha
I'll cleap up the birds!

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Page 6

1
[Inuyasha and co arrive in the castle.]
fx Inuyasha tmp
2
[Inuyasha looks at Sango, while putting his hand on Tetsusaiga's hilt.]
Inuyasha
Go, Sango.
fx Inuyasha shh
Sango
Thanks.
3
[Sango rushes off on Kirara.]
Sango
Kohaku!
fx Kirara whoosh
4
[Inuyasha swings down Tetsusaiga unleashing a lot of power.]
Inuyasha
Kaze no Kizu!! (Cutting Wind)
fx air whoosh

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Page 7

1
[Many birds are ripped apart.]
fx birds wham-am-am
2
[The blast hits a sphere in the air.]
fx blast wham-am
Inuyasha
{off} !
3
[Inside is Abi, surrounded by the barrier from the three-pronged halberd.]
Abi
Inuyasha...
You again huh.
4
[View of Inuyasha shouting.]
Inuyasha
Abi-hime you bitch, don't you learn your lesson...?

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Page 8

1
[View of Abi looking at the weapon.]
Abi
Humph... The only benefit from getting involved with Naraku,
is the barrier from this three-pronged halberd huh...
2
[Closeup of Abi.]
Abi
Inuyasha, you're Naraku's enemy aren't you!?
In which case, why does it seem like you're protecting this castle!?
3
[View of Inuyasha and Miroku.]
Inuyasha
What the!?
Miroku
This castle is...!?
4
[Inuyasha speaks to Abi.]
Inuyasha
Naraku is involved with this castle, you mean!?
Abi
Heh...

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Page 9

1
[Closeup of Abi.]
Abi
That's what I'm checking, you see.
Though so far, the only ones offering any resistance are the humans.
2
[Closeup of Inuyasha shouting.]
Inuyasha
What's the meaning of this!
What about you - aren't you working for Naraku!?
3
[View of Abi.]
Abi
You gotta be kidding.
He approached me on his on accord, that's all.
4
[Closeup of Inuyasha shouting.]
Inuyasha
So you've broken ties with Naraku then!?
In that case, don't you get involved any further!
We're the ones who'll waste Naraku!!

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Page 10

1
[Closeup of Abi shouting back.]
Abi
Don't you instruct me, Half-Youkai!
You're an eye-sore as well!!
2
[Abi charges down for an attack.]
Abi
I guess I'll finish you off first!
fx Abi whoosh
3
[Inuyasha swings down Tetsusaiga.]
Inuyasha
Kaze no Kizu!! (Cutting Wind)
fx air whoosh
4
[Abi blocks with the halberd.]
Abi
Heh.
fx blast wham-am

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Page 11

1
[Abi swings at Inuyasha, though she doesn't seem to hit directly.]
fx halberd *slice*
Inuyasha !
2
[A cut appears on Inuyasha's clothes, though it seems burnt.]
fx cut sizzle
Inuyasha
Miasma!?
3
[Kagome and Miroku look on worriedly.]
Kagome
Inuyasha!
4
[View of Abi, smiling.]
fx miasma hshhh...
Abi
Hehe.
It can do this as well huh.

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Page 12

1
[Abi charges forwards again.]
Abi
Half-Youkai! I'm going to make mince-meat of you!
fx Abi swish
2
[Inuyasha charges forwards too.]
Inuyasha
Impudent!
3
[Scene change. Black frame.]
4
[View of some birds about part of the castle.]
fx area rumble...
5
[The birds all start burning.]
fx flames pomph pomph

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Page 13

1
[Some soldiers outside look on in shock as the birds crash into the building, setting it on fire.]
fx flames roa-a-ar
soldier
Wha...!?
The birds are burning...!?
2
[View of the birds setting the building on fire.]
fx birds flap flap
fx panels *tear*
3
[Inside the room where the lady is, an attendant is looking outside.]
fx flames crackle crackle
attendant
Oku-gata-sama, the fire is...
lady
Wh, what should we do.
4
[A burning bird flies towards the attendant.]
fx bird whoosh
attendant
Yeek...
5
[The bird is sliced apart.]
fx bird *slice*
6
[Kohaku appears in the doorway, having killed the bird.]
fx dead bird tmp
lady !

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Page 14

1
[Closeup of Kohaku.]
Kohaku
Oku-gata-sama, go outside quickly!
If you stay here, you'll be burnt to death.
2
[Closeup of the lady, looking a bit shocked.]
lady
You are...
are called Kohaku I'm sure...
3
[View of Kohaku and the lady.]
Kohaku
Hurry.
lady
B, but there are monsters outside...
4
[Closeup of the lady shouting.]
lady
I must protect this child.
He's our precious successor.
5
[Black frame.]
Naraku
Kohaku, protect the baby.
6
[Closeup of Kohaku.]
Kohaku
It'll be okay.
I will protect him even if it means my life.

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Page 15

1
[The group are now moving towards the back of the builing it seems.]
fx group *running*
fx Kohaku (bird) *slice*
Kohaku
This way.
2
[View of the lady, carrying the baby, and two attendants, coughing from the smoke.]
fx attendant cough
attendant
I, it's painful.
lady
Hang in there.
3
[Kohaku knocks down a panel, leading outside.]
fx panel wham
4
[Some birds attack.]
fx birds flap flap
5
[Kohaku rips them apart.]
fx blade whizz
fx birds *slice*

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Page 16

1
[Some soldiers run up.]
soldier
Oku-gata-sama.
Waka-sama.
2
[Kohaku looks over at them.]
Kohaku
They're safe.
3
[The soldiers look down at Kohaku in surprise.]
soldier
You are...
lady
This child rescued us.
4
[Closeup of the lady.]
lady
Kohaku... You have my thanks.
5
[Closeup of Kohaku.]
Kohaku
Sure...

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[COMMENTS] Here Kohaku simply says "hai" which is much more flexible than a simple "yes" which is the closest English equivalent. In this case it's intended meaning would be more like "acknowledged" or "affirmative" but that sounds rather strange.

6
[One of the soldiers approaches Kohaku.]
soldier
We have to get to a safe place.
You stay beside oku-gata-sama.
Kohaku
Yessir.

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Page 17

1
[Scene switch to a view of the whole castle, which is burning.]
fx flames roa-a-a-r
2
[View of Kanna walking through the grounds, with corpses all around her.]
fx flames ro-a-a-r
fx wood crackle crackle
3
[Dark frame.]
voice
{off} Tono has...
been killed by a bird.
4
[Kanna looks to the side.]
5
[Closeup of Kanna.]
Kanna
The castle...
has fallen...

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Page 18

1
[Scene change to a closeup of Kohaku, his eyes suddenly going blank, and the Shikon fragment in his back is glowing.]
fx fragment *glow...*
fx fragment *surge of power*
2
[Black frame.]
Naraku
Kohaku, grab the baby.
Kill those around you.
3
[Kohaku is next to the lady, surrounded by attendants and soldiers.]
soldier
Don't let the birds get close!
soldiers
Right!
4
[Scene change to Sango riding on Kirara, looking around the castle.]
fx Kirara whoosh
5
[Closeup of Sango, looking nervous.]
Sango
Kohaku...

Last modified May 24th 2003

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NPC@2003-05-28 10:00

313话：

Inuyasha
-Sengoku o-Togi Zoushi
Part 313
Version: 0.800
Title: Sinful Memory
Written and illustrated by Rumiko Takahashi
Translated from: Shounen Sunday 2003 #25, 21st May 2003
© Rumiko Takahashi and Shogakukan 1996-2002

Translation & editing by
Chris Rijk
Additional translating and editing by
No one yet

This translation is © Chris Rijk 1996-2002.
Done expressly for non-profit use only. No unorthorised selling, renting etc.
Get the latest version from http://www.wot-club.org.uk/Inuyasha/.
Translations of this chapter, but with different styling/content are also available - a plain text version and also a text version with all the original Japanese for the speech and sound effects.

Translation notes and style

Although scene descriptions are provided, it is not nearly the same as seeing it for yourself. If you enjoy the series, I would strongly recommend buying the tankoubon (collected version, each about 180 pages or 10 chapters long, costing 410 yen) when they become available (typically 3-4 months after the weekly Shonen Sunday release), and the first 21 volumes are now on sale.

Warning: These translations will occationally include strong language, and violence, though this is only when it is present in the original Japanese version.

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Page 1

1
[Closeup of Kohaku with a fairly neutral expression. Overlaid is full view of Sango, looking a bit pensive.]
Title
Sinful Memory

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Page 2

1
[Sango is flying on top of Kirara, around the burning castle.]
fx flames ro-a-a-r
2
[Closeup of Sango looking worried.]
Sango
It was when Kohaku's mind... was being manipulated by Naraku.
3
[Flashback drawing to Kohaku killing his father and two comrades.]
Sango
He fell into Naraku's trap,
and rose against chichi-ue, our taiji-ya comrades,

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[COMMENTS] "Chichi-ue" is an old style respectful way of saying "father" - "ane-ue" would be the equivalent for "elder sister". A "taiji-ya" is professional exterminator or such a business.

4
[Flashback drawing of Sango getting struck in the back.]
Sango
and me as well...

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Page 3

1
[Drawing of Kohaku.]
Sango
Kohaku refuses to remember the events of that terrible day,
and while he has no memory, Naraku is using him.
2
[Black frame.]
Sango
Even still... Kohaku is the only brother I have.
3
[Closeup side view of Sango rushing along, looking anxious.]
Sango
So please...
don't commit any more sins.
4
[Scene change. View of some Youkai birds being shot by arrows.]
fx birds swish
fx arrows *stab*
5
[View of the soldiers, surrounding the lady and her attendants, as well as the baby and Kohaku.]
soldier
The number of birds has diminished.
oku-gata-sama, please endure just a bit longer.

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Page 4

1
[The group in the center seem quite relieved. Kohaku doesn't seem to react much.]
woman soldier
Thank goodness...
attendant
Oku-gata-sama, this means we're saved doesn't it.
2
[The lady speaks happily to Kohaku, but his face is shrouded in darkness and he doesn't seem to be reacting to anything.]
lady
Kohaku, it's thanks to you rescuing us.
3
[Closeup of the baby.]
lady
This child, isn't injured in the slightest.
4
[Two of the soldiers (well, probably samurai actually) look back at Kohaku.]
soldier#1
Really, you did excellent work despite being a child.
soldier#2
You'll get a reward for this later.
5
[Speed lined frame of something flashing, and blood splattering.]
fx thing swish

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Page 5

1
[The two soldiers have had their heads cut off. Two archers look at this in shock.]
fx heads fwip
archer Eh...?
2
[Kohaku catches his blood stained chain-blade.]
fx Kohaku *catch*
3
[The lady and the attendant look shocked.]
lady
Ko, Kohaku...?
attendant
Oku-gata-sama, this way...
4
[The others look on shocked at Kohaku.]
fx body thump
soldier
Wh, what are you doing.
5
[Closeup of Kohaku with no expression.]
Naraku
Kohaku, take the baby.
Kill those around you.

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Page 6

1
[Closeup of Kohaku.]
Kohaku
Why... do I have to kill these people.
2
[Black frame.]
Naraku
Kill them!
3
[Kohaku cuts down more of the soldiers.]
fx soldiers *slice*
4
[Two of the women soldiers who guard the lady charge forwards.]
woman soldier#1
D, damn you.
woman soldier#2
He's gone insane huh.
fx women *dash*
5
[The women are cut up.]
fx woman swish
fx woman *slice*

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Page 7

1
[Kohaku catches the blade as blood rains down around him and the bodies slump to the ground.]
fx bodies thump
fx Kohaku (blade) *catch*
Kohaku
I don't want to.
2
[Kohaku throws out the blade again, but he has no emotion.]
fx blade whizz
3
[The remaining male soldiers are cut down.]
fx soldiers *slice*
4
[Kohaku catches the blade again as the attendants huddle around the lady and the one remaining woman soldier faces Kohaku.]
fx blade *catch*
attendant
Eek!

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Page 8

1
[Closeup side view of Kohaku.]
Kohaku
What this?
This nasty feeling...?
2
[Black frame.]
Naraku
Take the baby.
Kill those around you.
3
[The remaining woman soldier and attendants are cut down.]
fx soldier *slice*
fx attendants shh
4
[View of the lady holding the baby, looking on in shock at all the dead people.]
fx bodies thump

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Page 9

1
[Closeup of the lady, looking terrified and bewildered.]
lady W...
Why...
2
[Kohaku is now standing over the lady, about the kill her.]
fx Kohaku (blade) *raise...*
3
[Sango arrives.]
fx Kirara whoosh
Sango !
4
[Closeup of Sango shouting.]
Sango
Kohaku!
5
[View of Kohaku from behind (Sango's point of view).]
fx Kohaku twitch

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Page 10

1
[Kohaku turns around.]
Kohaku
Ah...
2
[View of Sango.]
Kohaku
It's that person...
3
[Closeup of Sango looking shocked at something.]
Sango !
4
[Closeup of the bodies on the ground.]
Sango
They... weren't killed by the birds.
5
[Sango is now standing on the ground, looking at Kohaku who has turned around to face Sango.]
Sango
Kohaku, you...
fx Kohaku shh...

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Page 11

1
[The lady looks up at Kohaku who is now ignoring her.]
lady ......
2
[The lady jumps to her feet, running.]
fx lady *dash*
3
[The lady leaves the area, while Kohaku doesn't even react.]
fx lady shh shh
4
[Closeup of Sango.]
Sango
Kohaku...
5
[Closeup of Kohaku, with blood all over him.]
fx mist shhh...
6
[Scene change. The lady is running out of the castle, looking fearfully behind her.]
fx lady swish

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Page 12

1
[The lady looks ahead to see Kanna standing in front of her.]
fx Kanna *quiet movement...*
fx lady shh
lady
!
2
[The mirror flashes with light as the lady's face appears in it.]
fx mirror flash
3
[The lady's eye's go blank.]
fx lady *slump...*
4
[Scene change to Kagura appearing in the gloom above the castle.]
fx Kagura *fade into view*
5
[Closeup of Kagura looking down, overlaid on a view of the ground, with Kanna standing before the lady.]
Kagura
Kanna...?
So she was in this castle huh.

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Page 13

1
[Closeup of Kanna sitting beside the lady, from Kagura's point of view.]
2
[Closeup of Kagura looking a bit surprised.]
Kagura
Hm?
3
[View of Kanna holding the baby, from above.]
Kagura
That's...
4
[Closeup of Kagura, overlaid over a closeup of the baby.]
Kagura
The other half of Hakudoushi?
5
[Kagura turns to see some Saimyoushou in the air beside her.]
fx insects rustle...
Kagura
Hm?
6
[View of Kagura looking at the Saimyoushou, who are looking at her.]
fx insect bzz..
Kagura
Huh!? "Go pick up Kohaku"!?
7
[View of Kagura looking down towards the ground.]
Kagura !

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Page 14

1
[View of the ground from above. The lady can be seen, but nobody else.]
Kagura
That darn Kanna...
has already gone...
2
[Scene change to Sango and Kohaku facing each other.]
fx air shh...
3
[Closeup of Sango, looking a bit sad.]
Sango
Kohaku, you...
have done it again, haven't you...
4
[Side view of Kohaku.]
Kohaku
Again...?
5
[View of Kohaku, looking vague.]
Kohaku
What...
does she mean...?

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Page 15

1
[Hazy flash-back drawing of when Kohaku killed his father and comrades.]
2
[Closeup of Kohaku looking shocked.]
3
[Kohaku puts a hand to his face, looking confused.]
Kohaku
Eh...?
What was that just now...?
4
[Another hazy flash-back, this time of Sango being stabbed in the back by the chain-blade. This is from Kohaku's view at the time.]

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Page 16

1
[The hazy flash-back continues - Sango turns around to look at her brother, except in his memory, he can't remember her face.]
2
[Closeup of Kohaku, with eyes wide.]
Kohaku
This... is...
3
[The flash-back continues - a closeup of Sango looking shocked and disbeliving at what Kohaku did to her.]
4
[Closeup of Sango now, looking at Kohaku in concern.]
Sango
Kohaku...?
5
[Closeup side view of Kohaku, eyes wide.]
fx Kohaku (heart) thump

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Page 17

1
[Suddenly the air around Kohaku in front of Sango rushes up.]
fx air whoosh
2
[View of Kagura up in the air.]
Sango
{off} !
3
[Closeup of Sango shouting.]
Sango
Kohaku!
4
[On Kagura's feather, Kohaku looks back down at Sango.]
Kohaku ......
5
[Dark frame.]
Kohaku
That's right... I...

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Page 18

1
[Closeup of the blood-stained chain-blade and Kohaku's hand on it.]
Kohaku
with this hand...
I [killed] chichi-ue and everyone...
2
[View of Sango from above - this is Kohaku's point of view.]
3
[Closeup of Kohaku.]
Kohaku
Ane-ue...
4
[View of Sango, looking sadly up at Kohaku.]
Sango
Kohaku...

Last modified May 25th 2003

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NPC@2003-05-28 10:04

312话11页：

313话16页：

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忧郁の犬夜叉@2003-05-28 10:09

...倒~309还没看...

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水雨草@2003-05-28 15:47

琥珀要清醒了？？！！

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白色帝国之子@2003-05-28 16:10

姐第两有相遇了,可怜的琥珀,往事不堪回首啊!!!

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INuYaSha_kitsu@2003-05-28 16:12

哈哈，有戏看啦~~~~~~~
琥珀和珊瑚的情节大展开咯~~~~~~~~~~^^

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Bobbysoft@2003-05-29 09:12

Kuhaku's sinful memory has been evoked. Maybe death is the best way for him, but I think as a good child he may try to survive for Sango, for he is the only relation to her.

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zouave_takato@2003-05-29 09:14

喷！！！吐血！！！！这种场面要重复多少次才算数啊？！
无论如何，还是谢谢小N！

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kellyshen@2003-05-29 12:03

这个要怎么看啊？我怎么什么图都没看见？

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sandwater@2003-05-29 12:19

英文看了有点头大（惭愧），还是看日文稍微好一点。但我连309话还没看过，现在看312话、ちょっとね……

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琥珀这样闹下去何时了阿

阿季@2003-05-29 12:56