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Inuyasha
-Sengoku o-Togi Zoushi-
Part 284

Version: 0.800
Title: Darkness in the Heart
Written and illustrated by Rumiko Takahashi
Translated from: Shounen Sunday 2002 #45, 9th October 2002
Copyright Rumiko Takahashi and Shogakukan 1996-2002
Translation & editing by
Chris Rijk
Additional translating and editing by
No one yet

This translation is copyright Chris Rijk 1996-2002.
Done expressly for non-profit use only. No unorthorised selling, renting etc.
Get the latest version from http://www.wot-club.org.uk/Inuyasha/.

Although scene descriptions are provided, it is not nearly the same as
seeing it for yourself. If you enjoy the series, I would strongly
recommend buying the 'tankoubon' (collected version, each about 180
pages or 10 chapters long, costing 410 yen) when they become available
- the first was released on 18th April 1997, and the first 21 are now
available.

Warning: These translations will occationally include strong language,
as well as violence, though this is only when it is present in the
original Japanese version.

Page 1
1
[Side view of Inuyasha, looking serious and calm.]
Title: Darkness in the Heart

( The "darkness" in the title refers to negative experiances and feelings in
peoples' hearts. (Cue Yoda warning about the Dark Side))

Page 2
1
[View of the lady and the baby ("Naraku Jr" doesn't have a name yet). The
baby seems to have lilac coloured hair.]

2
[Closeup of Kagome.]
Kagome: .oO(This baby...).
Kagome: .oO(if an offspring of Naraku...).

3
[Kagome looks rather worried (and she is still quite securely tied up),
looking at the baby, while Kagura watches on from the side.]
Kagome: .oO(He's the offspring born at Mt Hakurei.).

Page 3
1
[Closeup of Kagome.]
Kagome: What do you intend to do with me?

2
[View of the baby, and the woman, who is pretty much emotionless.]
baby: I already said.
baby: You are the only one you can see the Shikon fragments...

3
[Closeup of the baby.]
baby: I want your eyes.

4
[Closeup of Kagome looking a bit stunned.]
Kagome: !?

5
[The lady holding the baby stands up.]
Fx lady: shh
Kagome: !

Page 4
1
[Kagome looks rather worried as the lady (carrying the baby) approaches.]
Kagome: Wh, what's with you!
Kagome: What're you doing!?

2
[Kagome turns around to look at the entrance.]
Kagome: Miroku-sama, Sango-chan!

3
[View of the baby, with a smile.]
baby: Kukuku. Futile...
baby: They don't have time for you.

4
[Scene change. Miroku and Sango are tired up and in a group with the other
travelers. They're surrounded by soldiers from the castle carrying swords.]
soldier: Slay them all.
soldier: It's the okugata-sama's order.
traveler: S, spare us...

5
[View of Sango and Miroku.]
Sango: If there's "no use" for us, then...
Miroku: Yeah, the objective of these people seems to be Kagome-sama.

Page 5
1
[A soldier charges towards Sango, sword raised.]
soldier: Go to heaven!

2
[The hidden blade Sango has on her arm bursts out, cutting the rope.]
Fx rope: shunk

3
[Sango blocks with the blade.]
Fx weapons: clang
soldier: Wha...

4
[Some soldiers look on in surprise.]
soldier#1: Hidden weapon!?
soldier#2: Yo, you wench...

5
[Sango cuts the rope on Miroku's arms.]
Sango: Houshi-sama!
Fx Sango: shh
Miroku: Thanks!

Page 6
1
[A group of soldiers with poles charge.]
Fx soldiers: (war cry) yaahh
soldier: Grab them!

2
[Miroku takes a pole off one of them.]
Fx pole: whish
Fx Miroku: *grab*

3
[Miroku knocks the soldier back with the pole.]
Fx soldier: whump

4
[Sango charges past two soldiers, cutting their poles with her blade.]
Fx weapons: clang
Sango: Outta the way!

5
[Sango picks up her huge boomerang and faces some soldiers armed with swords.]
Fx soldiers: shh

Page 7
1
[View of the other travelers, still tied up.]
traveler: R, run.

2
[A soldier rushes forwards, sword raised.]
soldier: You bastards!
Fx soldier: *dash*

3
[Miroku knocks him back with the pole.]
Fx Miroku: swish
Fx soldier: wham

4
[Sango knocks several soldiers back with Hiraikotsu.]
Fx soldiers: wham wham

5
[Sango and Miroku are back to back.]
Sango: This lot, are nothing special.
Miroku: Yeah, however...
Fx Miroku: shh

Page 8
1
[Sango and Miroku face the soldiers surrounding them.]
Miroku: this people are just humans who are obeying an order from higher up.

2
[Closeup side view of Miroku.]
Miroku: Not only can't we kill them, it's many against few...
Miroku: It seems it'll take a while.

3
[Scene change. The lady is standing just in front of Kagome, who is seated
on the ground.]
baby: Kukuku, Kagome...
baby: I'm going to... make use of your eyes.

4
[Closeup of the baby.]
baby: Kagura, remove the rope on Kagome.

5
[Kagura is standing behind Kagome, who looks around.]
Kagura: Are you sure?

Page 9
1
[A small blade of wind cuts the rope on Kagome.]
Fx rope: *slice*

2
[The lady puts the baby down.]
Fx lady: snk

3
[Kagura holds Kagome's shoulders so she can't move easily.]
Fx Kagura: *grip*

4
[The baby's arms are reaching out towards Kagome.]
Fx baby: *reach out...*
Kagome: !

5
[Kagome shrinks back in fear, closing her eyes.]
Kagome: No!

6
[Closeup of the baby with a slight smile.]
baby: What are you afraid of.
baby: Did you think I was going to take your eyeballs and eat them?

7
[Closeup side view of Kagome looking afraid.]

Page 10
1
[The baby pushes himself against Kagome's chest.]
Fx baby: *grip*

2
[Closeup of the baby, who's eyes partially close, as if he's looking at
something else.]
Fx baby: *fade out...*

3
[Closeup of the baby's partially open eye.]
baby: .oO(What's with this girl's soul...?).
baby: .oO(I can't find... any darkness?).

4
[Misty frame.]
baby: .oO(That shouldn't be possible.).
baby: .oO(Every human should have darkness in their hearts.).
baby: .oO(Anger, hatred, and...).

5
[Closeup side view of Kagome with dark energy swirling around her.]
Fx energy: *stir of power...*
Kagome: .oO(What's this creepy feeling...!?).

6
[View of Kagome and the baby, dark energy swirling around them.]
Kagome: .oO(It's as if...).
Kagome: .oO(the inside of my heart is being scanned...).

Page 11
1
[Misty frame.]
Kagome: .oO(Save me, Inuyasha...).

2
[Closeup of Kagome with shocked realisation.]

3
[Black frame.]
Kagome: .oO(Inuyasha won't be coming.).

Page 12
1
[Drawing of Inuyasha from behind, as if leaving or distant.]
Kagome: .oO(Inuyasha is...).
Kagome: .oO(searching to find Kikyou...).

2
[Closeup of Kagome looking a bit sad.]
Kagome: .oO(Inuyasha...).

3
[Closeup of the baby's eyes opening wide.]
baby: .oO(Found it.).
Fx eyes: *flash open*

4
[Energy crackles out from the baby.]
Fx Kagome: *stab of pain*
Kagome: !

Page 13
1
[Closeup of the baby.]
baby: I've grasped it.
baby: The darkness in your heart...

2
[Closeup side view of Kagome with her eyes looking glazed, and showing no expression.]
baby: Now... you can't escape.

3
[Black frame.]
baby: Now then... Hold me. Carefully okay...
baby: Then...

4
[Black frame.]
baby: our souls become one...
baby: and you become my eyes.

5
[View of Kagome holding the baby against her shoulder.]
Fx baby: *hold...*

Page 14
1
[Closeup side view of Kagome with her eyes closed.]
Kagome: .oO(Inuyasha...).

2
[Misty frame. Scene change.]

3
[Inuyasha is standing by the bank of a river.]
Fx water: slish...

4
[White frame.]
Inuyasha: .oO(I can't smell Kikyou.).
Inuyasha: .oO(There's no villagers who have seen a miko.).

5
[Side view of Inuyasha.]
Inuyasha: .oO(What's going on...).

Page 15
1
[Closeup of Inuyasha noticing something (smelling something it seems).]
Fx Inuyasha: twitch

2
[Inuyasha looks around.]
Fx leaves: rustle...

3
[Inuyasha sees some dark shapes in the sky.]
Inuyasha: Youkai...?

4
[View of Shippou standing in some tall grass, looking worriedly up at the sky.]
Fx Shippou: (heart) *thump thump thump*
Shippou: I...
Shippou: I somehow managed to get away.

5
[Closeup of Shippou looking worried.]
Shippou: I can't find Inuyasha...
Shippou: and I got separated from Kirara too...

6
[Shippou holds up an acorn.]
Shippou: I've got no choice but to use this after all.

7
[Shippou is suddenly picked up by his tail.]
Fx Shippou: *tug*
Fx Shippou: yikes!

Page 16
1
[Inuyasha is holding a terrified looking Shippou. A bunch of acorns fall to
the ground, crying.]
Inuyasha: Shippou... What are you doing?
Fx acorns: *clatter down*
acorns: Wahh. Wahh. Wahh.

2
[Shippou yells at Inuyasha angrily.]
Shippou: Don't surprise me like that, you total moron!

3
[Kirara approaches from behind.]
Fx Kirara: shh...
Inuyasha: Kirara.

4
[Time passes. Misty frame.]
Inuyasha: Kagome and the others were taken to a castle?

5
[Closeup side view of Inuyasha thinking.]
Inuyasha: .oO(While I'm looking for Kikyou...!).
Inuyasha: .oO(Could it be... a plot?).

Page 17
1
[Scene change back to the castle. A bunch of soldiers get hit in the head.]
Fx soldiers: whack whack

2
[Around Sango and Miroku are a lot of unconscious soldiers.]
soldier: Uhh...
Fx Sango: shh

3
[View of a volley of arrows.]
Fx arrows: vish

4
[Sango and Miroku block them.]
Fx arrows: (hitting Hiraikotsu) whack
Miroku: Ugh.
Fx arrows: (hitting Miroku's staff) clang

Page 18
1
[Kagura is looking on.]
Kagura: .oO(Humph... They're still alive.).

2
[Side view of Kagura walking off.]
Kagura: In addition, they have no intention of taking the soldiers' lives... huh.
Kagura: That lot are as carefree as ever.

3
[Black frame.]
baby: Kukuk... They'll want to kill before long.

4
[Kagura enters the room where Kagome is holding the baby.]
baby: Because the people from the castle intend to kill them.

5
[Closeup of the baby, smiling contentedly.]
baby: The castle people's malice will be reflected,

6
[Black frame.]
baby: and before long the humans will kill each other.

Page 19
1
[View of Sango and Miroku looking a bit desperate.]
baby: {off} People's hearts' are fragile...
baby: Hatred is born easily.

2
[View of Kagome and the baby.]
baby: This girl is the same.

3
[Scene change. View of Inuyasha rushing along with Kirara and Shippou behind him.]
Fx Inuyasha: swish

4
[Closeup side view of Inuyasha looking worried.]
Inuyasha: .oO(Kagome!).

Last modified October 12th 2002

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NPC@2002-10-17 20:39

日文原版的TEXT VERSION

Inuyasha
-Sengoku o-Togi Zoushi-
Part 284

Version: 0.800
Title: Darkness in the Heart
Written and illustrated by Rumiko Takahashi
Translated from: Shounen Sunday 2002 #45, 9th October 2002
Copyright Rumiko Takahashi and Shogakukan 1996-2002
Translation & editing by
Chris Rijk
Additional translating and editing by
No one yet

This translation is copyright Chris Rijk 1996-2002.
Done expressly for non-profit use only. No unorthorised selling, renting etc.
Get the latest version from http://www.wot-club.org.uk/Inuyasha/.

Although scene descriptions are provided, it is not nearly the same as
seeing it for yourself. If you enjoy the series, I would strongly
recommend buying the 'tankoubon' (collected version, each about 180
pages or 10 chapters long, costing 410 yen) when they become available
- the first was released on 18th April 1997, and the first 21 are now
available.

Warning: These translations will occationally include strong language,
as well as violence, though this is only when it is present in the
original Japanese version.

Page 1
1
[Side view of Inuyasha, looking serious and calm.]

Title: Darkness in the Heart

( The "darkness" in the title refers to negative experiances and feelings in
peoples' hearts. (Cue Yoda warning about the Dark Side))

Page 2
1
[View of the lady and the baby ("Naraku Jr" doesn't have a name yet). The
baby seems to have lilac coloured hair.]

2
[Closeup of Kagome.]

Kagome: .oO(This baby...).

Kagome: .oO(if an offspring of Naraku...).

3
[Kagome looks rather worried (and she is still quite securely tied up),
looking at the baby, while Kagura watches on from the side.]

Kagome: .oO(He's the offspring born at Mt Hakurei.).

Page 3
1
[Closeup of Kagome.]

Kagome: What do you intend to do with me?

2
[View of the baby, and the woman, who is pretty much emotionless.]

baby: I already said.

baby: You are the only one you can see the Shikon fragments...

3
[Closeup of the baby.]

baby: I want your eyes.

4
[Closeup of Kagome looking a bit stunned.]
Kagome: !?

5
[The lady holding the baby stands up.]
Fx lady: shh
Kagome: !

Page 4
1
[Kagome looks rather worried as the lady (carrying the baby) approaches.]

Kagome: Wh, what's with you!

Kagome: What're you doing!?

2
[Kagome turns around to look at the entrance.]

Kagome: Miroku-sama, Sango-chan!

3
[View of the baby, with a smile.]

baby: Kukuku. Futile...

baby: They don't have time for you.

4
[Scene change. Miroku and Sango are tired up and in a group with the other
travelers. They're surrounded by soldiers from the castle carrying swords.]

soldier: Slay them all.

soldier: It's the okugata-sama's order.

traveler: S, spare us...

5
[View of Sango and Miroku.]

Sango: If there's "no use" for us, then...

Miroku: Yeah, the objective of these people seems to be Kagome-sama.

Page 5
1
[A soldier charges towards Sango, sword raised.]

soldier: Go to heaven!

2
[The hidden blade Sango has on her arm bursts out, cutting the rope.]
Fx rope: shunk

3
[Sango blocks with the blade.]
Fx weapons: clang

soldier: Wha...

4
[Some soldiers look on in surprise.]

soldier#1: Hidden weapon!?

soldier#2: Yo, you wench...

5
[Sango cuts the rope on Miroku's arms.]

Sango: Houshi-sama!
Fx Sango: shh

Miroku: Thanks!

Page 6
1
[A group of soldiers with poles charge.]
Fx soldiers: (war cry) yaahh

soldier: Grab them!

2
[Miroku takes a pole off one of them.]
Fx pole: whish
Fx Miroku: *grab*

3
[Miroku knocks the soldier back with the pole.]
Fx soldier: whump

4
[Sango charges past two soldiers, cutting their poles with her blade.]
Fx weapons: clang

Sango: Outta the way!

5
[Sango picks up her huge boomerang and faces some soldiers armed with swords.]
Fx soldiers: shh

Page 7
1
[View of the other travelers, still tied up.]

traveler: R, run.

2
[A soldier rushes forwards, sword raised.]

soldier: You bastards!
Fx soldier: *dash*

3
[Miroku knocks him back with the pole.]
Fx Miroku: swish
Fx soldier: wham

4
[Sango knocks several soldiers back with Hiraikotsu.]
Fx soldiers: wham wham

5
[Sango and Miroku are back to back.]

Sango: This lot, are nothing special.

Miroku: Yeah, however...
Fx Miroku: shh

Page 8
1
[Sango and Miroku face the soldiers surrounding them.]

Miroku: this people are just humans who are obeying an order from higher up.

2
[Closeup side view of Miroku.]

Miroku: Not only can't we kill them, it's many against few...

Miroku: It seems it'll take a while.

3
[Scene change. The lady is standing just in front of Kagome, who is seated
on the ground.]

baby: Kukuku, Kagome...

baby: I'm going to... make use of your eyes.

4
[Closeup of the baby.]

baby: Kagura, remove the rope on Kagome.

5
[Kagura is standing behind Kagome, who looks around.]

Kagura: Are you sure?

Page 9
1
[A small blade of wind cuts the rope on Kagome.]
Fx rope: *slice*

2
[The lady puts the baby down.]
Fx lady: snk

3
[Kagura holds Kagome's shoulders so she can't move easily.]
Fx Kagura: *grip*

4
[The baby's arms are reaching out towards Kagome.]
Fx baby: *reach out...*
Kagome: !

5
[Kagome shrinks back in fear, closing her eyes.]

Kagome: No!

6
[Closeup of the baby with a slight smile.]

baby: What are you afraid of.

baby: Did you think I was going to take your eyeballs and eat them?

7
[Closeup side view of Kagome looking afraid.]

Page 10
1
[The baby pushes himself against Kagome's chest.]
Fx baby: *grip*

2
[Closeup of the baby, who's eyes partially close, as if he's looking at
something else.]
Fx baby: *fade out...*

3
[Closeup of the baby's partially open eye.]

baby: .oO(What's with this girl's soul...?).

baby: .oO(I can't find... any darkness?).

4
[Misty frame.]

baby: .oO(That shouldn't be possible.).

baby: .oO(Every human should have darkness in their hearts.).

baby: .oO(Anger, hatred, and...).

5
[Closeup side view of Kagome with dark energy swirling around her.]
Fx energy: *stir of power...*

Kagome: .oO(What's this creepy feeling...!?).

6
[View of Kagome and the baby, dark energy swirling around them.]

Kagome: .oO(It's as if...).

Kagome: .oO(the inside of my heart is being scanned...).

Page 11
1
[Misty frame.]

Kagome: .oO(Save me, Inuyasha...).

2
[Closeup of Kagome with shocked realisation.]

3
[Black frame.]

Kagome: .oO(Inuyasha won't be coming.).

Page 12
1
[Drawing of Inuyasha from behind, as if leaving or distant.]

Kagome: .oO(Inuyasha is...).

Kagome: .oO(searching to find Kikyou...).

2
[Closeup of Kagome looking a bit sad.]

Kagome: .oO(Inuyasha...).

3
[Closeup of the baby's eyes opening wide.]

baby: .oO(Found it.).
Fx eyes: *flash open*

4
[Energy crackles out from the baby.]
Fx Kagome: *stab of pain*
Kagome: !

Page 13
1
[Closeup of the baby.]

baby: I've grasped it.

baby: The darkness in your heart...

2
[Closeup side view of Kagome with her eyes looking glazed, and showing no expression.]

baby: Now... you can't escape.

3
[Black frame.]

baby: Now then... Hold me. Carefully okay...

baby: Then...

4
[Black frame.]

baby: our souls become one...

baby: and you become my eyes.

5
[View of Kagome holding the baby against her shoulder.]
Fx baby: *hold...*

Page 14
1
[Closeup side view of Kagome with her eyes closed.]

Kagome: .oO(Inuyasha...).

2
[Misty frame. Scene change.]

3
[Inuyasha is standing by the bank of a river.]
Fx water: slish...

4
[White frame.]

Inuyasha: .oO(I can't smell Kikyou.).

Inuyasha: .oO(There's no villagers who have seen a miko.).

5
[Side view of Inuyasha.]

Inuyasha: .oO(What's going on...).

Page 15
1
[Closeup of Inuyasha noticing something (smelling something it seems).]
Fx Inuyasha: twitch

2
[Inuyasha looks around.]
Fx leaves: rustle...

3
[Inuyasha sees some dark shapes in the sky.]

Inuyasha: Youkai...?

4
[View of Shippou standing in some tall grass, looking worriedly up at the sky.]
Fx Shippou: (heart) *thump thump thump*

Shippou: I...

Shippou: I somehow managed to get away.

5
[Closeup of Shippou looking worried.]

Shippou: I can't find Inuyasha...

Shippou: and I got separated from Kirara too...

6
[Shippou holds up an acorn.]

Shippou: I've got no choice but to use this after all.

7
[Shippou is suddenly picked up by his tail.]
Fx Shippou: *tug*
Fx Shippou: yikes!

Page 16
1
[Inuyasha is holding a terrified looking Shippou. A bunch of acorns fall to
the ground, crying.]

Inuyasha: Shippou... What are you doing?
Fx acorns: *clatter down*

acorns: Wahh. Wahh. Wahh.

2
[Shippou yells at Inuyasha angrily.]

Shippou: Don't surprise me like that, you total moron!

3
[Kirara approaches from behind.]
Fx Kirara: shh...

Inuyasha: Kirara.

4
[Time passes. Misty frame.]

Inuyasha: Kagome and the others were taken to a castle?

5
[Closeup side view of Inuyasha thinking.]

Inuyasha: .oO(While I'm looking for Kikyou...!).

Inuyasha: .oO(Could it be... a plot?).

Page 17
1
[Scene change back to the castle. A bunch of soldiers get hit in the head.]
Fx soldiers: whack whack

2
[Around Sango and Miroku are a lot of unconscious soldiers.]

soldier: Uhh...
Fx Sango: shh

3
[View of a volley of arrows.]
Fx arrows: vish

4
[Sango and Miroku block them.]
Fx arrows: (hitting Hiraikotsu) whack

Miroku: Ugh.
Fx arrows: (hitting Miroku's staff) clang

Page 18
1
[Kagura is looking on.]

Kagura: .oO(Humph... They're still alive.).

2
[Side view of Kagura walking off.]

Kagura: In addition, they have no intention of taking the soldiers' lives... huh.

Kagura: That lot are as carefree as ever.

3
[Black frame.]

baby: Kukuk... They'll want to kill before long.

4
[Kagura enters the room where Kagome is holding the baby.]

baby: Because the people from the castle intend to kill them.

5
[Closeup of the baby, smiling contentedly.]

baby: The castle people's malice will be reflected,

6
[Black frame.]

baby: and before long the humans will kill each other.

Page 19
1
[View of Sango and Miroku looking a bit desperate.]

baby: {off} People's hearts' are fragile...

baby: Hatred is born easily.

2
[View of Kagome and the baby.]

baby: This girl is the same.

3
[Scene change. View of Inuyasha rushing along with Kirara and Shippou behind him.]
Fx Inuyasha: swish

4
[Closeup side view of Inuyasha looking worried.]

Inuyasha: .oO(Kagome!).

Last modified October 12th 2002

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幽雪*苍紫@2002-10-17 20:49

谢谢小N
好好考试！

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sunleill@2002-10-17 20:51

彩页？

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mhyx2985@2002-10-17 21:28

那个奇怪的婴儿要取戈薇的眼睛？

紧张啊！~

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daimin90@2002-10-17 22:59

这小婴儿可够厉害的，他从那儿来？

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