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[原创]Chinese New Year

靚女@2003-01-06 18:24

Chinese New Year is coming. We are very happy. At Chinese New Year, my sisters and I help our mother to clean the house. Mother will take us to the shop to buy some new clothes. At night, my grandmother cooks some Chinese New Year food for us. Next morning, we go to our aunt’s home to get red packets and say KUNG HEI FAT CLOY(恭喜發財) to her. And then we go to the flower market to buy some beautiful flowers at night. My sisters and I are very happy when we see the fireworks show.

I like Chinese New Year food. My mother likes to eat fried pasty and turnip cakes because she can cook very well. My grandpa likes to eat black seaweed, turnip cakes, fried doughnuts, fried pasty, dried melon needs and New Year pudding. My friends like to eat confectionery in candy box and New Year pudding because they are delicious. For me, I like fried doughnuts, fried pasty and dried melon.

In the time of New Year, I must be very happy.
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terrysemon@2003-01-10 20:32

这不是最典型的中国式english吗？
感觉有点像高中生作文！
楼主有待提高呀！

mysg：优惠期奖励+30，稍后加上^_^
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sakura200101@2003-01-11 10:15

靓女的英文是不是和中文差不多呢?
条理清楚....结构清晰...没有语法错误...^^
鼓励鼓励........多写写多看看..一定会写的更好的.....^^

mysg：奖励10漫元，稍后加上
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unlimitedzon@2003-01-12 01:59

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最初由 terrysemon 发布
这不是最典型的中国式english吗？
感觉有点像高中生作文！
楼主有待提高呀！


我MM才小學生！汗~ 有點高中生作文感覺？這句她看見開心死！:p

MM寫得不錯！姐姐覺得以小學程度來說已非常好！姐姐十分鼓勵妳寫原創！有空寫多些！;)

第2段的食物名比較多！但很多新年食物不是很多人吃過，好像蘿蔔糕，不是很多人知道是甚麼！建議MM在.英文字旁加中文解釋！^^

mysg：奖励30漫元，稍后加上^_^
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JLK555@2003-01-13 01:50

MM你的英语暴强~~~

连我这个英盲都看的懂~~~

明天我写信建议你去新华社做翻译~~~

呵呵~~~不要生气哦~~~
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