[歌词]a secret of the moon

Planet-ES里感觉最为惊艳的天籁,动画里出现了两回,眼眶也湿润了两回^^
歌词是自己听的,肯定有错误疏漏之处,希望有达人能纠正,谁有官方原版歌词的话更好~~~

when I wished aboard the moon
deepest dreams has parked of love
leafs swim in the sky
take me into your world

when I wished aboard the moon
dreams come true
I place the destiny
you've found me
I was always there with you

a secret of the moon
let me be the sun that lights over your way
I live for you

I'll live for love

When I wished aboard the moon
Deepest dreams
Spark of life
Leaves swing in the sky
Take me into your world

When I wished aboard the moon
Dreams come true
I place the destiny
You've found me
I always there with you

A secret of the moon
Let me be the sun that lights over your way
I live for you

I'll live for love

校对稿一完毕，供参考

多谢!漏洞就不用提了.

When I wished aboard the moon
Deepest dreams
Spark of life这个听起来好像love
Leaves swing in the sky死活米听出这个词~郁闷
Take me into your world

When I wished aboard the moon
Dreams come true
I place the destiny
You've found me
I always there with you

A secret of the moon
Let me be the sun that lights over your way
听起来象是that's lights of？
I live for you

I'll live for love

一到混音的地方就哈不清晰……55555555

问个菜鸟问题…… 请问哪里有下载？ 我在GOOGLE上搜了老半天 都是其他类似名字的歌 就是找步到这首……

原来大家都对这首歌很有感觉啊~~
觉得在片中的几首配乐也很不错的说~~

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最初由 Marsiss 发布
那句
leaves swing in the sky
怎么听起来还素象这个……SWING呀……听8出来
lives in the sky

似乎漫游的音乐FTP上就有吧，混乱的忘记哪里下的了……擦汗

御月：请不要在讨论区发求下载帖T_T

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最初由 観月奈留 发布
When I wished aboard the moon

You've found me

大家觉得这2句语法是否有错误？？？

You've found me

是不是应该是 you'll found me

你将会找到我~~~~~

I always there with you

是不是应该是 I always with you

我总在你的身旁~~~

you'll found me?即使是将来时态，也该是you'll find me吧
wished的过去时态倒确实不明显的说

there很明显素有的，但是感觉怎么少个动词？
I'm always there with you?
I was always there with you?
混音呀……>_<不清楚……