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Inuyasha
-Sengoku o-Togi Zoushi
Part 308
Version: 0.800
Title: The Pool
Written and illustrated by Rumiko Takahashi
Translated from: Shounen Sunday 2003 #19, 9th April 2003
© Rumiko Takahashi and Shogakukan 1996-2002

Translation & editing by
Chris Rijk
Additional translating and editing by
No one yet

This translation is © Chris Rijk 1996-2002.
Done expressly for non-profit use only. No unorthorised selling, renting etc.
Get the latest version from http://www.wot-club.org.uk/Inuyasha/.
Translations of this chapter, but with different styling/content are also available - a plain text version and also a text version with all the original Japanese for the speech and sound effects.

Translation notes and style

Although scene descriptions are provided, it is not nearly the same as seeing it for yourself. If you enjoy the series, I would strongly recommend buying the tankoubon (collected version, each about 180 pages or 10 chapters long, costing 410 yen) when they become available (typically 3-4 months after the weekly Shonen Sunday release), and the first 21 volumes are now on sale.

Warning: These translations will occationally include strong language, and violence, though this is only when it is present in the original Japanese version.



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Page 1

1
[View of Inuyasha looking serious. Partial closeup of hijiri-sama, with the person's face somewhat visible.]
Title
The Pool


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[COMMENTS] The literal translation of the title ("Takitsubo") would be "the basin of the waterfall", but that sounds rather awkward, so I shortened it.



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Page 2

1
[View of the side of a tree covered mountain, with dark energy swirling around it.]
fx area rumble...
2
[Inuyasha and hijiri-sama face off in the clearing.]
fx leaves rustle...
3
[View of hijiri-sama from Inuyasha's point of view.]
Inuyasha
Kikyou, is this you!?
4
[Closeup side view of Inuyasha looking.]
Inuyasha
From this person...


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Page 3

1
[White frame.]
Inuyasha
no scent of Kikyou is coming off.
However...
2
[Closeup of Inuyasha speaking forcefully.]
Inuyasha
You face...
Show me your face!
3
[Closeup side view of hijiri-sama.]
fx leaves rustle...
4
[Scene change. Sango and Kagome are on Kirara, with Miroku running beside them.]
fx Kirara whoosh
fx Miroku shh-shh


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Page 4

1
[Kagome is looking behind her, seeming a bit worried.]
Kagome
Inuyasha... I wonder if he's okay.
Sango
He'll catch up shortly, don't worry.
2
[Closeup side view of Kagome thinking.]
Kagome
That... is true. The one who most wants to meet hijiri-sama...
is Inuyasha after all.
3
[Miroku notices some Youkai in the air above him.]
fx youkai rustle...
Miroku !
4
[Miroku shouts to Sango and Kagome.]
Miroku
Sango! There's more Youkai coming.
5
[The Youkai swoop in to attack.]
fx youkai swish


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Page 5

1
[Miroku throws a bunch of o-fuda.]
Miroku
{attack cry} Hah!
fx o-fuda swish
2
[Some Youkai are blasted apart.]
fx youaki *melt*
3
[Sango drops off Kagome and Shippou beside a tree.]
Sango
Kagome-chan, Shippou, stay here!
Kagome
Right.
4
[Sango joins the battle.]
Sango
Hirakotsu!
fx youkai whack whack


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Page 6

1
[Shippou is standing protectively in front of Kagome, who has her bow out, with an arrow ready. Shippou looks rather on edge.]
Shippou
Ka, Kagome, I'll be with you.
Kagome
Sure.
2
[Shippou's eyes bulge out as he sees a glow in the distance through the trees.]
fx light *glow...*
3
[Kagome points an arrow in that direction.]
Shippou
Ka, Kagome! There's Youkai.
fx Kagome shh
Kagome Eh...
4
[View of two Youkai in the forest. It's two of the soul carrying insect like Youkai that Kikyou uses.]
fx youkai swish...
5
[Closeup of Kagome looking surprised.]
Kagome !
6
[Kagome runs off towards them.]
Kagome
Kikyou's Shinidama-chuu!!
fx Kagome swish
7
[Miroku looks over while destorying a Youkai.]
fx Miroku swish
Miroku !
Kagome-sama!


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Page 7

1
[Kagome turns around to look behind her while rushing forwards, after the Youkai.]
fx Kagome swish
Kagome
I'm going after them!
2
[Miroku rushes after her.]
Miroku
Wait, that's reckless!
fx Miroku swish
3
[Kagome rushes along ahead, and suddenly the scenery around her swirls, and her image becomes vague.]
fx image *fade...*
4
[Shippou and Miroku look on in surprise.]
Shippou
S, she' disappeared.
Miroku
A barrier...?
5
[Scene change. Misty frame.]
6
[Inuyasha continues to address hijiri-sama.]
Inuyasha
Answer me.
Are you Kikyou or not!?
7
[Closeup of one of the shikigami, who look like young girls.]
shikigami
The strong miasma weakened her greatly...


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Page 8

1
[Side view of the two shikigami.]
shikigami#1
Her body won't return to the original form.
shikigami#2
And she's lost her voice...
2
[View of "hijiri-sama".]
shikigami
{off} Only her soul can fight.
However...
3
[Closeup side view of Inuyasha looking a bit surprised.]
shikigami
soon her power will be exhausted...
4
[Flashback drawing to what Inuyasha saw of the scene where it seemed Naraku had killed Kikyou.]
Inuyasha
At that time...
she didn't die.
5
[Inuyasha rushes forwards.]
Inuyasha
Kikyou!
fx Inuyasha *dash*
Inuyasha
It's you, isn't it Kikyou!?


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Page 9

1
[Closeup of two wind-blades rushing through the air.]
fx blades swish
2
[The blades cut right through the middle of "hijiri-sama".]
fx blades whack
fx horse whinny
3
[Closeup of Inuyasha looking shocked.]
Inuyasha !


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Page 10

1
[The hood falls off "hijiri-sama", and the face and head of someone looking quite like Kikyou can be seen.]
fx clothes flap...
2
[Inuyasha rushes forwards desperately.]
Inuyasha
Kikyo-o-o-u!!
3
[Inuyasha nears the place where the body falls to the ground.]
fx clothes flap
fx arrows clatter clatter


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Page 11

1
[Inuyasha reaches where she fell, but there doesn't seem to be a body, just the clothes lying on the ground.]
fx horse whinny...
fx Inuyasha swish
2
[Closeup of Inuyasha putting his hand on the clothes.]
fx clothes flap
Inuyasha !?
3
[Closeup of Inuyasha looking shocked and puzzeled.]
Inuyasha
There's... no body!?
4
[View of a small piece of paper drifting away from the clothes. It seems vaguely shaped like a person.]
fx paper flutter...
Inuyasha
{off} !
5
[Inuyasha picks up the paper and looks at it.]
Inuyasha
This is... human shaped.
6
[Inuyasha looks up at a voice.]
voice
{off} Sheesh, you just can't figure her out, this Kikyou person.


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Page 12

1
[Inuyasha looks up to see Kagura on a feather up in the sky.]
Inuyasha
Kagura!
2
[Closeup of Inuyasha shouting.]
Inuyasha
You bitch... What's going on!?
3
[View of Kagura.]
Kagura
That's what I want to ask.
I was made to go on a fool's errand.
4
[Closeup of Inuyasha.]
Inuyasha
Kikyou... is still alive!?
5
[Closeup of Kagura.]
Kagura
Humph... That's what Naraku thinks.
6
[Drawing of the arrow that destoryed the barrier around Hakudoushi.]
Kagura
The arrow that broke that brat Hakudoushi's barrier...


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Page 13

1
[Closeup side view of Kagura.]
Kagura
had soil from Onigumo's cave spread onto the arrow-head.
2
[Drawing of Onigumo, in the cave where he "died". Drawing of Inuyasha overlaid.]
Inuyasha
Wha...
3
[Continuation of above.]
Inuyasha
I see... That was the smell on the arrow back then...
4
[View of Inuyasha.]
Kagura
{off} That soil in that place...
is suffused with the thoughts Naraku had for Kikyou.
5
[Closeup of Kagura.]
Kagura
That soil opposes Naraku, and protects Kikyou, or so I heard.
The only person who can use Onigumo's soil is Kikyou.
6
[Closeup of Inuyasha thinking.]
Inuyasha
Kikyou is...
alive somewhere!


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Page 14

1
[Kagura rushes off into the distance, while turning to look back at Inuyasha.]
Kagura
Whatever the case, we both got dragged around by a fake, basically.
fx feather whoosh
Kagura
See ya!
2
[Closeup of Kagura, smiling a bit.]
Kagura
Naraku's greatest opponent is still alive...
This is getting interesting.
3
[Inuyasha looks around. There's nobody in the glade, apart from "hijiri-sama's" clothes.]
fx Inuyasha rustle...
fx clothes flutter...
4
[Vague drawing of the two shikigami.]
Inuyasha
They've also...
5
[Closeup of Inuyasha.]
Inuyasha
...vanished.
6
[Scene change. View of some tree tops.]
7
[Kagome is climbing up a steep slope.]
fx Kagome shh


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Page 15

1
[Kagome crests the top, and sees the two Youkai a short distance ahead of her.]
fx Kagome shh
fx youkai swish
2
[The two Youkai seem to be waiting for Kagome.]
fx youkai swish
3
[Closeup side view of Kagome thinking.]
Kagome
They're... inviting me?
4
[View of a waterfall and the pool at the bottom.]
fx water slish...
5
[Kagome approaches the pool. This is the same place as the two shikigami were pouring in soil from Kikyou's grave earlier.]
fx water slish...
Kagome
A waterfall...
6
[Reflection of Kagome looking into the pool - she seems surprised.]
Kagome !


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Page 16

1
[Closeup of what's in the pool. It's Kikyou. She looks like normal, and is dressed like normal, despite being underwater, but she seems to be unconcious.]
fx water shh...


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Page 17

1
[Closeup of Kagome looking surprised.]
Kagome
Kikyou...
2
[Closeup of Kikyou.]
fx water slish...
3
[Kagome is kneeling by the water's edge, looking in.]
Kagome
Eh...?
Is she alive? Or...?
4
[View of some trees.]
shikigami
{off} Her life...
is starting to run out.


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Page 18

1
[Kagome turns to see the two shikigami girls behind her.]
Kagome !?
2
[View of Kikyou.]
shikigami
{off} The miasma is continuing to spread.
3
[Closeup of the two shikigami.]
shikigami#1
Please choose.
shikigami#2
To save her...
or not...
4
[Closeup of Kagome looking shocked.]
Kagome
Eh, "choose"...?
What do they mean!?




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谢谢帮忙了..下周才会有空呵...^^
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谢谢帮忙了..下周才会有空呵...^^
PS:附图能否帮忙上传..



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GOD!
要死了~~什么东东阿……看不懂嘞~~
有没有中文的翻译啊?汗……
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万幸!!
尽管偶知道自己的英语水平是N烂的,但还是
不信邪的进来瞧一瞧。
结果就……
偶真是自卑呀,在这儿聊天的各位大人的英语
水平都是这么的棒。
偶一定要多多练习呀··

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